Feedback on First Edit

The feedback I got back on my first edit was what I predicted it would be and they commented on all the points I commented on in the previous post entitled 'Thoughts Before Feedback on First Edit'

The comments on the jumpiness of the first edit of the filming was commented on and told to make less jumpy. I will do this by adding in sections of film that I think are relevant to the film such as the running that I previously filmed.

The comment on the audio is that the film relied heavily on the music but the music complements the film very well.

Another negative comment that I got was that it is all in one shot and from one shot angle and this limits the film, but I will have to disagree with this point made as I wanted this effect from the film. Another comment was that people didn't know where the film was intending to go but again this is exactly the feeling I want the audience to feel, when watching the film.